Domo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[No Words [altonefour]]

well its good but not great :(

it deserves a 7
-Song-\It was ok but it was just the same thing through the whole thing.But a little bit after the 1 minute mark it stated to change up a little.I don't know what rave sounds like,but if it is spose to sound really smiler to techno then you nailed it.I liked listening to the song with the transitions on which makes everything real jumpy .The angry faic I like the most with every song for some reason.I liked the ending though.How it fades away bu it is still real up beat.It would of been real good with vocals.You should use this song as a background song with some vocals

-improvements-
Any way it needed more oomph or something.And more different sounds.

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aryst0krat responds:

Thanks for the review!

We would absolutely love to have vocals in our songs, but unfortunately, I can't sing and my bandmate is more or less a metal singer.

As for the repetition, the composition of the song seems pretty varied to me, especially in comparison to some of our others songs and songs of the same genre, so I'm guessing you mean the er, notes of the lead, in particular? I hadn't really noticed that until now, but it's definitely something to work on.

Thanks again :)

[-+-Crash and Burn-+-]

This makes my but move

-Song-
It starts off with the big start at the ending.It reminded me of a sonic game.I liked how this song had some solos.And the drum beats were a nice mix.This song was kind of repetitive but still great.And it still had some mixed up parts so it wasn't all the same.It kept me in there from start to finish of the song.Plus a super great ending.I like this kind of music though on newgrounds.Creating fun songs is how NG users use your songs in flash.

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Hikigane responds:

The SA2B OST has always been a favorite of mine, so it comes to no surprise that some of my songs might have that rock feel so prominent in the Sonic consoles games. Repetitive sections are due to this song originally having vocal sections (verse chorus verse chorus x2 bridge is my usual format) but not actually having the vocals. i feel like I use this disclaimer a lot, but its true. I'm planning on making strictly instrumental songs very soon though, so repetivity should decrease significantly :D Thanks much for your review!

[All I Want - High]

Drug songs rock

0:25-you finally start adding the guitar and clapping,which it sounded awesome.I started clapping by myself in my room alone.It was kinda sad.It got repetitive
2:05-It starts to finally slow down which made me wander whats next
3:05-guitar stops and I just hear clapping which it kinda reminded me of a church choir.
3:30-The clapping and voices get quieter
3:55-more quieter
4:05-Some guy talking
4:06-crazy noises start happening
4:20-they start to get louder
4:35-Quiet again
5:10-just clapping
5:17-End of song

-Song-
It was very repetitive.Like VERY.This song could of been 2 and a half minutes or at least 3 but nearly 5 and a half is way to long.When you took out the guitar I started to lose interest.

points...
Vocals-1/2
Guitar parts-2
Clapping-1 1/2
My but was moving-4
Repetitive- -1
Overall=7

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Monkeydelic responds:

Thanks for review.

I do agree it gets repetitive, and will make it shorter, maybe like 2 minutes or something, just enough to get the point across, or maybe add more parts, not sure yet.

Thanks again :)

[DurpDurp (Mans0n)]

Super Great

I can't even begin to explain how much I love this song.But I will try

-Song-
The beginning,that beat it got to me.From start to finish it had me.Around 15 seconds that sound that sounded like hissing was a great add on to this mix.At 30 seconds I get this siren like sound and voices which I freaking loved.I started hearing sounds like farts which was funny and cool.At 1 minute is started to get faster and added techno beeping like sounds and I really liked that cause it sounded like some futureistic song.At around 2:50 some sounds I have never heard in a song before poped up which really changed the way I looked at this song.Then you started adding back the normal sounds from the song but kept this sound in the background playing which really started getting to me and I started dancing.

I favorited this.Added you into my favorite flash authors and this is the first song I downloaded off newgrounds.You really are a great audio artist mans0n and don't let anyone tell you other wise.This deserved weekly first.Super Great job

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Mans0n responds:

thanks for the awesome review domo!

[What I Am (Mans0n)]

funky fresh

This song reminds me a lot of that one song you put on the jello.Huh do you remember that site.

-Audio-
Repetitive.I have heard a few pieces of your audio and they were real nice so this track surprises me.But the first minute it was making my but jiggle and I was saying "woo dance party at my house" but then after that you start to say "yawn".But near the 2 minute mark you threw in like some tv snow sound and I really digged that.after 30 secs it starts to fade away.And then returns to the same schedule.So it was nice but mix it up a little.

-Improvements-
Nothing much just make it a little less repetitive and and more instrumental stuff and not all beat bots.you did good on this audio.

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Mans0n responds:

thanks for the advice, and review! and yeah I remember the jello, lol.

Check out my new track DurpDurp.

[-RG- In a Teardrop]

I thought it was great

This is the type of stuff that reminds me of sneaky movies

-Audio-
Well what I really like is how it starts adding a little and little more pump to the music.Such as this tapping sound and slight music to a violin and then drums.Also after a while the sound started to get more dark and I liked that cause at the beginning its calm.The middle is all dark and loud it starts to get calm again and then all action like music and then calm.So this kinda stuff if I had flash I would use your audio.

-Improvements-
I liked it but it just takes a little while to get in to the song so it bores you a little at the end

Im glad I listened to the whole thing cause if I would of just listened to the beginning It would of been a 6 but the rest was good so 9

Question:What was the instrument playing at the beginning with the tapping noise.I remember the name of the instrument it is on the tip of my tongue

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Raven-Guard responds:

"This is the type of stuff that reminds me of sneaky movies"

Heh, thanks. It actually might fit rather well in a spy-ish movie, but then again, as Coop83 said, it can be used in a great many themes, so you can never be sure.

"Well what I really like is how it starts adding a little and little more pump to the music.Such as this tapping sound and slight music to a violin and then drums.Also after a while the sound started to get more dark and I liked that cause at the beginning its calm.The middle is all dark and loud it starts to get calm again and then all action like music and then calm.So this kinda stuff if I had flash I would use your audio."

Cool :D. We made it like that since the calm parts can provide a break from all the action, and then when we build up to the action, it'll sound more epic and mighty.

"I liked it but it just takes a little while to get in to the song so it bores you a little at the end"

Hm, I agree that it does take a while to actually start (it actually starts the action halfway through the song :P) but we tried to give a gradual intro. Maybe we could have given it a few more interesting elements at the beginning.

"Im glad I listened to the whole thing cause if I would of just listened to the beginning It would of been a 6 but the rest was good so 9"

Hehe :D.

"Question:What was the instrument playing at the beginning with the tapping noise.I remember the name of the instrument it is on the tip of my tongue"

That's a xylophone :P.

Thanks for the great review!
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Supersteph54

[Undone [Final]]

well it was ok

The first part almost put me to sleep

-Audio-
It was decently good.The first part could put you to sleep but when the vocals start it gets a little bit better.I wouldn't consider this in general rock though.It still was a really good song so I wouldn't call it bad.

-Vocals-
They were kinda hard to understand and some parts had to much of an echo to it.And there was enough not to little but not overwhelmed with lyrics.So at least it was evened out with instrumental and lyrics

-Improvements-
Not much to say you are a really great audio artist but you should focus on more fast moving songs.Cause your hiphop and techno songs are awesome

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djnet responds:

yeah im not really a vocalist...i try my damndest...im much better on the piano and guitar...and where would i be without reason and protools

Thanks for the well detailed review

Also i'm really glad to hear you listen to my other tunes...party on man

[Epic Lulz]

WoW

This video is truely LULZ my favorite audio on newgrounds

balloonpoop responds:

why thank you. thank you very much! means a lot.