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[Copcicles]

Review

Well the flash was ok in my point a view. There is a lot more good things I could say about it then bad.

The Jokes in this flash made me chuckle. I was not rolling on the floor laughing but just good enough to bring that small laugh. The voicing was to sketchy. It could be ignored but it could be better. The story was that kind of crappy hilarious story where its so simple that its awesome which is what a lot of movies live off of these days. And the idea to make them popcicles was real creative.

The animation in this flash could have taken more work. I would of liked to see more improvements on the art & animation for the next one. For being a trailer I can care less but the real thing you need it to be the best it can be. All the small stuff could be worked on like just the details, colors, texture, effects all that stuff. Spending 10 minutes on that wouldn't hurt and it would be better in the long run. I do not own flash though so I do not know how hard it is.

Overall just improve on the animation. The story to simple, jokes cheesy, and the voices were terrible. Some of that I liked though cause it gave the flash character and creativity. So please do your best with the animation and I would love to see this become a real thing.

Story - 7
Art & Animation - 4
Voices - 5
Overall - 5.333333333333 (rounded to 5)

\\Review Request Club//

The-Mercenary responds:

this was a fake trailer thats making fun of the cheesyness of movie trailers and has bad voiceovers on purpose :(

[klik say happy clock day]

I wish I had my camara

-Likes-
Well there are a lot of contributors so you know its good. The authors description is flawless "happy clock day" I almost threw up when I read it since its so amazing. And that ad "Perfect World MMORPG" really pulled it all together. Soapbubble really did a good job with the story line. thenewbies is a great company. I like there shoes. And Idiot-Finder is Artist and Sound. DAMM. If it wasn't for him it would just be stick figures and spitting noises. And xenonmonkey best voice actor ever. He had the right voice for it. The animation ran smoothly and Great job programming this. I was profound by how awesome this flash is

-DisLikes-
Well after looking real closely at this I realized it was just a white box and that wasn't cool.

-improvements-
Next time make a red box

-Points-
Art&Animation - 10
Sound&Music - 10
Ad - 10
Description - 10
Graphics - 10
Story line - 10
Voice - 10
Colors - 10
Title - 9 (needed more monkeys)
Contributors - 10
Score - 9
Usage of the color white - 0
Overall - 9.80333333333(rounded to 10)

Klik responds:

it is artistic genuis

[Dont Shave Pubes On Plane]

uhh

I have no idea what this is.I did not like it,but i still think it is maybe good.

-Animation-
Well there pretty was no animation.This clock cartoon was just the first clock move its cursor thing and patriot clock nod.And then a video footage of 9/11.But at the end there was some reading rainbow thing so that was kinda funny.And the 9/11 thing was small so if there was a way to resize that you should of.Also it was pretty good art and drawings.

-Audio-
One thing I like about clock flashes is the way they talk.Do you guys use speech engines or is it some other program.And for me the audio was not off even though it was on high quality.Although when the clocks talk some words become hard to understand.

-Story concept-
I know you did not mean to offend anyone with the 9/11 thing and it is good thing you put that or else I would of taken it real seriously.Next time please don't put anything against someones race,religion.or country cause that could really hurt some people

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PatriotClock responds:

Clocks generally use the Speakonia program for voices. Some use voice acting or an AT&T program, but generally Speakonia is the most common.

Also to make the 9/11 footage larger would have distorted it and made it even lesser quality.

[Frame By Frame Flash]

well

It was good but you know not good.Some parts I like some parts i don't

-Animation-
Well the drawings are good and nice and cool.The animating is a little choppy.I would really work on that cause a flash that runs real smooth is always real good.I also like that it wasn't just stick figures some other things were faces and animals so I really like how you did that so its not technically a stick animation

-Audio-
The audio was just sad.It was just real heavy metal which made no sense when there are butterflys and mushrooms in your flash.I did not like the song but thats just my opinion.I would really recommend you using a different song next time maybe a song from the newgrounds audio portal.

-Story line-
I made no sense at all it was first sticks fighting then transforming him killing himself mushrooms melting.I was thinking WTF.But it was very amusing and entertaining so I will give you points for that.It was also a cool idea.So even though it made no sense it still kicked some major ass

[Review Request Club]

J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:

I love HORSE the Band so I thought the music fit perfectly in my mind. This video was my very own creative expression at it's finest and nothing more so to me there is no need for it to be perfect. I like that it is choppy. I like that it starts off with seemingly poor animation and shoddy stick figures and then transforms into more complex and beautiful images. There was not supposed to be a plot or point that would make sense to anyone but myself. I put my heart into this and spent over a month of constant work drawing over 2000 unique pictures and to me the result was beautiful. Nevertheless, thank you for the honest and constructive review. I hope others read my response to this before reviewing again, although I do not expect it to change peoples opinions of it.
-J0hnnyR0tt3n

[South Park on Censorship]

rock on

that was awesome

psychicpebbles responds:

thanks!

[Andrew's Birthday]

I liked it

was Andrew a friend of yours or you just picked a random name

NGReviewEater responds:

It actually was a random name I pulled out of the air.

Also this doesn't deserve a 10, but thanks for the review anyway!

[The Shape N' Shape Collab]

THIS IS GOOD

it doesn't get enough credit.Everyone is giving it 6-2 reviews but im giving it a 9

ChandlerThompson responds:

Wow, thanks man! All reviews are greatly appreciated!