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[Copcicles]

Review

Well the flash was ok in my point a view. There is a lot more good things I could say about it then bad.

The Jokes in this flash made me chuckle. I was not rolling on the floor laughing but just good enough to bring that small laugh. The voicing was to sketchy. It could be ignored but it could be better. The story was that kind of crappy hilarious story where its so simple that its awesome which is what a lot of movies live off of these days. And the idea to make them popcicles was real creative.

The animation in this flash could have taken more work. I would of liked to see more improvements on the art & animation for the next one. For being a trailer I can care less but the real thing you need it to be the best it can be. All the small stuff could be worked on like just the details, colors, texture, effects all that stuff. Spending 10 minutes on that wouldn't hurt and it would be better in the long run. I do not own flash though so I do not know how hard it is.

Overall just improve on the animation. The story to simple, jokes cheesy, and the voices were terrible. Some of that I liked though cause it gave the flash character and creativity. So please do your best with the animation and I would love to see this become a real thing.

Story - 7
Art & Animation - 4
Voices - 5
Overall - 5.333333333333 (rounded to 5)

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The-Mercenary responds:

this was a fake trailer thats making fun of the cheesyness of movie trailers and has bad voiceovers on purpose :(

[klik say happy clock day]

I wish I had my camara

-Likes-
Well there are a lot of contributors so you know its good. The authors description is flawless "happy clock day" I almost threw up when I read it since its so amazing. And that ad "Perfect World MMORPG" really pulled it all together. Soapbubble really did a good job with the story line. thenewbies is a great company. I like there shoes. And Idiot-Finder is Artist and Sound. DAMM. If it wasn't for him it would just be stick figures and spitting noises. And xenonmonkey best voice actor ever. He had the right voice for it. The animation ran smoothly and Great job programming this. I was profound by how awesome this flash is

-DisLikes-
Well after looking real closely at this I realized it was just a white box and that wasn't cool.

-improvements-
Next time make a red box

-Points-
Art&Animation - 10
Sound&Music - 10
Ad - 10
Description - 10
Graphics - 10
Story line - 10
Voice - 10
Colors - 10
Title - 9 (needed more monkeys)
Contributors - 10
Score - 9
Usage of the color white - 0
Overall - 9.80333333333(rounded to 10)

Klik responds:

it is artistic genuis

[eBaums world dot com]

An epic milestone of NG history.

-Likes-
The authors of the ultimate showdown of course would create something just as great. It had a very distinct mood and tone to it. And about 5 years later this flash is still kicking ass. For 2005 this is better than some 2010 stuff. There was some slow parts and fast parts which was a great mixture. This was one of the greatest flashes I have came across within months. This is a very good flash. Just everything is above standereds the art,animation,music. I had a blast of listening to this.

-Dislikes-
NONE. Nothing I hate about it not 1 thing which its been a while since I ever had that.

-Points-
Music - 10
Lyrics - 10
Animation - 10
Overall - 10

[Cookin by the Book]

Go clocks

Well its old.So that makes this a relic

-Art&Animation-
Art:The clock stuff is always greatly drawn in my opinion except for the crappy pink haired slut which made me laugh.There is a couple points for that.
Animation:They moved very different in this one I think it might be cause of the flash programs back then.It was ok

-Voices-
I could hardly hear them in this flash.Speech engine back then must of not been as good as what they do today

points...
Art&Animation-2
Voices-0
pink haired slut-3
Made in 2006-1
Overall=6

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[CaddyJam]

An epic battle

Well it looked alright.That basketball game made history

-Art&Animation-
Art:There was no art.Everything in that flash was screen shots.The only thing that was drawn was the clocks cursor.But other then that the cursor was drawn nicely and the screen shots had good quality except for the explosion.couple points for that.
Animation:Well at first the only thing that moved was the cursor.But then there was a very epic basketball shot that blew my freaking mind.Nice job.I mean the graphics that had it must of taken weeks or months of work to get that

-Improvements-
Make some of the stuff next time

points...
Art&Animation-2(All screen shots -1)
basketball scene-7
Overall-8

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[WGJ4K: Robert Burgless]

Anither great triumph

Well it was a good one kinda.The old ones were pretty good but they changed.I understand you were trying to finish all 10 before 2011 but you have 3 episodes left and 5 months.You can spend more time on the next one.But for making it within a few weeks is good.And why did you remove the theme song and the new credits were good.Looking forward for the next one

[WGJ4K: Tough Guy FronT]

a great milestone

My favorite series on newgrounds releases its next hit.

Things I like
I love the new preloader.Its nice from after episodes of the same preloader they mix it up a little.The return of the boss was great and fun but you did not see him much.I also like how some jokes from the first and second episode were reused which made me remember of how the old episodes of wacky game jokez for kids used to be and how much they have changed over time.The jokes were more random to so I like that.And how June introduced this episode I like that little bit of a difference

Things I did not like
Your newer episodes are starting to be real short and less funny.It is not as wacky and more serious and not as funny

[30s Dominoes]

not good?this is great

This flash was excellent.It just went from dominoes falling to all this other cool stuff like turbines, dominoes upside down,ghost, explosions,and 3d effects.I like the little bit of 3D effects and how the ghost form I thought that was awesome.So for a first flash animation it was good.Great art,runs smooth,and good visual quality.Nice work

[Phalanx]

I loved that

This doesn't seem like a clock flash cause it is really good.no offence

-Animation-
Really cool it was like some kind of computer ERROR thing which i really like.It went from shapes to blocks to drawing and all this cool stuff.I added this to my favorites cause just how awesome it was.I really like it the most cause it went from simple moving shapes to more complex things like building blocks to moving animations.I also liked that red tv snow like background at the end.It was a little laggy but I think that is my computer speed.If it was up to me I would have made this daily first.

-Audio-
Things that are bad 0.Things that are good EVERYTHING.I loved the techno like music.It was like a mix between techno and hiphop.I very much enjoyed this flash.You should think about ubmiting it to the audio portal cause I would love to download this song.And other flash authors might like to use it.I did think it was a little repetitive but I still loved it.

-Improvements-
Not much only a couple.It did have a lag but its probably my computer but if your not doing at least 30 FPS then that is kinda low if it is 30 FPS or MORE then congrats.And if you do make another music flash give it a little more of a difference.Other then those to small things your did exellent with this flash.But just keep up the good work.

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[Dont Shave Pubes On Plane]

uhh

I have no idea what this is.I did not like it,but i still think it is maybe good.

-Animation-
Well there pretty was no animation.This clock cartoon was just the first clock move its cursor thing and patriot clock nod.And then a video footage of 9/11.But at the end there was some reading rainbow thing so that was kinda funny.And the 9/11 thing was small so if there was a way to resize that you should of.Also it was pretty good art and drawings.

-Audio-
One thing I like about clock flashes is the way they talk.Do you guys use speech engines or is it some other program.And for me the audio was not off even though it was on high quality.Although when the clocks talk some words become hard to understand.

-Story concept-
I know you did not mean to offend anyone with the 9/11 thing and it is good thing you put that or else I would of taken it real seriously.Next time please don't put anything against someones race,religion.or country cause that could really hurt some people

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PatriotClock responds:

Clocks generally use the Speakonia program for voices. Some use voice acting or an AT&T program, but generally Speakonia is the most common.

Also to make the 9/11 footage larger would have distorted it and made it even lesser quality.