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[Boring 101]

hrmmmm............................................

meh.. its boring

-Art-
There is not much I could say about this I don't know how mrty did such a good review.But it has no effort(no points)But you tried(1 point).But you should of put effort in it and 20 minutes is ok for this.I could not make this 20 minutes.The gag on the board gave me a small chuckle so I will give you a fourth of a point.But that is all I could say
Total points-1 and 1/4

-Improvements-
Put more effort in to it next time and don't make it so dull

But I will be nice and round it up to 2

[Review Request Club]

up-a-notch responds:

i know...also i make all my stuff in 20 minutes!

[Fatty McGee]

alrighty then

you really should make your art a little different.You other pieces are ok but these kind I don't really care for.

-The Guy-
I like the chocolate around his mouth that shows that he was eating it(half a point).The hair looks ok ,no points for it though cause it is to high up so it looks like a wig.I love his facial expression how it has that fat guy look in his eye(1 point).Hes has a big shadow so it shows that he is fat but his body looks kinda skinny so not half a point of a point(fourth of a point).Shirt plain and all it has is Food written oddly on it(8th of a point).I like the chocolate in his hand and it looks detailed a little(half a point) but his arm holding it looksvery.....retarded.The belly sticking out of his shirt doesn't add up.All it is is it looks like the shirt is to tight(8th a point).Pants and shoes very plain.(half a point)
Total points from "The Guy"-3

-Background-
The grass looks very nice,you really tried hard on the grass and it looks real nice(1 and half points)Clouds look better than the last art you made like this"Mr. Molocule"(1 point).The sun looks fat which pairs up nicely(1 and half points).Sky is all right plain so no points.I liked the back ground a lot more than the person for some reason.Im a sucker for a good background.
Total points for "Background"-4

-Improvements-
The background was pretty plain so make it more detailed and interesting.A more detailed background and I probably would of gave you a 10.But I did like it more than the person.So I would recommend drawing him better next time.You draw great though.And make it more 3d.This piece it looks like you tried to purposely make him 2d with no 3demension.Also add some layer effects next time to.

Your other art looks real nice.I recommended you and if you were scouted I would favorite your art.And its this art I do not like not your other art

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up-a-notch responds:

why do you like my other art more (pm me) also i like your reviews :D and for my next art i will try to be as detailed as possible!

[John Lennon]

I like it but I cant explain it

Instead of judging this on the art overall im going to judge you on each feature

-Hair&Facial Features-
The hair is greatly drawn.2 points of this review score is from the hair.Thats 1 5th of the score.It isn't just some hair with a bunch of little lines,it has details lineing overlapping other strands of hair.It looks real shaggy and that makes it look like the real deal.A little more of those V's like what Soapbubble said.The eye brows you could of done better with them.There is no detail.It looks just lick a blob.You could of a least done a little strands of hair like ///////// \\\\\\\\\.Instead of them being so bushy a blobish looking.No points for eyebrows.The chin badger(little beard)I like the little upside down triangle.You could of made it go down a little more.But you get half a point.Eyes,They are beady but nothing bad from it cause the glasses make up for it.If there were no glasses I would of gave you no points for that but for the glasses there you get half a point.Nose,Very real looking.It overlaps the other nostrial just like a real nose its angled and the shape it looks real nice.For the nose you get 1 points.Ears,There are no ears there covered by the hair.Mouth,Just a straight line if there would lips you would of got 1 point but it is just half a point for the mouth.
Total points from hair&Facial Features-5

-Accessories&Emotions-
The glasses looked good and covered the beady eyes and they looked like the 60's glasses so you get no points for the glasses.Shirt not much its covered mostly all it looks like is a jersey but I will give you half a point.The facial expression he has is just staring blank into space which is a normal look but I would of liked a smile or some emotion.Half a point for emotions
Total points from Accessories&Emotions-1

-Color&Background-
The colors were nicely blended.The way they just went from the color to the background color.So it was like a really cool fading type thing.Some parts were left out of color and I like it like that where it looks like it was done in 5 minutes.1 point for color.And the background,anything that blends in with the NG background color gets 1 point.
Total points form Color&Background-2

I usually don't do reviews like this but I wanted to try something new

[Review Request Club]

up-a-notch responds:

i like your reviews like this!

[Sleepy Head]

nothing wrong with it...

...but it could use some work

-Art-
Well lets imagine what it would look like with out color.That looks nice now add the color.hrm we got a little bit of slop.We can tell you tried to blend the colors to make it look more real but you kinda failed.You have potentioal but you need to apply more to your art.Some spots don't even have color.Like around the edges of things it just blends in with the backgrounds color which makes it look like you didn't put much into it.But I can't tell if you used real drawings and scantroned it on to your computer or if you used a paint program to make it.Next time put more effort in to it

[Review Request Club]

up-a-notch responds:

ok sure

[A Comic made out of boredom]

this rocks

Hey spoild do you use a tablet cause that is way to good of drawing to have been made with a mouse.MY web comic series had came to an end last week

spoildmilk responds:

gotcha

[Woman]

good

I have no idea why you drew this but it is great.

-Drawings-
Good Like in the middle of the drawings its clear but the outlines are fuzzy.I like how the background is the grass and it surrounds her.That gives off a weird quit mood.The hair I don't like but I like the way it is drawn very detailed very artistic.The bellybutton is a little to high up though.And the feet have no toes it just looks like on big foot.Well the boobs go a little far out but nothing wrong with that.

-Body-
Well I'm just going to dock you on each body part.Feet there are no toes,body nicely drawn it has a good hour glass figure,boobs a little out,hands look very real,belly button to far up,vagina you can't really tell but it is still noticeable,face real nice lots of emotion,hair real frizzy and cool.

Do you know where this is going.In to my favs great job

[Review Request Club]

Merol responds:

Actually, I know why I drew this, but it's just a long story.
I'm very surprised because I never noticed that the belly button was very high, really, I never did.
I think the background can be anything you want. For me, it looks more like if she were inside of a brain or something.

Anyway, it's really awesome that this is in your favorites now...
THAANKSS A LOTTT!!!

[Mr. Monocle]

Crappy,yet Great

Looks like a 6 year old did it.Which is exactly why I like it

-Drawing-
The drawing is nice.It might look crappy.But if you took out the colors you can tell he actually tried.The suit you could of added a little bit more like some zippers or buttons.but I took the colors out with my mind power and it did look decent.If you took time to color it better(but we can tell you purposely did it badly) it would have deserved a 9.

-Colors-
I like the colors very bright.To bad they aren't in the lines.I like it though you must color out of the lines cause you like to be yourself.There are different shades of colors in certain parts.Like the sky it looked nice but the sun.Green?The sun is not green.That threw me off a lot.

-Improvements-
Not much you did it on purpose but color in the lines next time.And add a little more to the dull parts of the painting(like the suit)And take the green out of the sun

[Review Request Club]

up-a-notch responds:

ok sure

[Burned Tower (Ecruteak City)]

aint to shabby

This is the kinda stuff I like it reminds me of me in preschool

-Art-
One thing I absolutely love about your art is when your hand drawn art reminds me of like a fourth grader doing it(no offence) and your flash art is like a damm master piece.I don't hate it I love art like that.It reminds me of elementary school.So please don't think i am insulting you for saying it looks like fourth grade art cause to me its great

-Color-
Me I color outside the lines but you stay in them and keep it neat.The coloring and the shading was nice.So nice I can't tell if you are using crayons or colored pencils.The trees are that nice Autumn color.What I don't like about the trees are not mixed colors which to my opinion would of been nicer.

-Improvements-
The only thing I can think of is not your art overall just what I would of like to see in this photo.Just the trees shading and the burned tower doesn't look burned.Just the top looks a little singed and the windows are a little ashy.So in the flash versioon just change it up a little.

At least your one of those flash artist who really deserve to be scouted

[Review Request Club]

[art]

cool kinda

kinda boring though

[Mushroom Kingdom Stand-Up 1]

Lovely

It was on ok piece of art.It gave a little chuckle.Your art is way better then mine

-Art-
I thought it was great.It did make me laugh.Not like burst out laughing but a chuckle for a minute and I like the way you drew your art its just that Luigi doesn't look like he usually does.I know you purposely did that but he reminds me of a movie star.The only thing I miss is Luigi's big nose.I like the title panel with Luigi's hat on a microphone.One thing that makes me like a comic is no speech bubbles.I hate speech bubbles cause they remind me of Marmaduke so at least you did not use speech bubbles or I probably would of said 7.

-Improvements-
The comic looks real plain so if you do make a sequel make a background that is a little more colorful.And some shading and more mixture of colors.

[Review Request Club]

Iplaygames responds:

Thanks man, appreciate it.